Feedback-Kris

update

Hey Charles, is it starting to look better now?

Feedback-Michael

Good work Mike. I suggest some adjustments: Keep the hair, fur more transparent that means  less opaque brighness, you can see through the colour of the background here and there. Clean the fur a little to have better definition for legs, necks....and the most important : soften and the brushstroke should not too straight, rigid.

Horses love feedback

Feedback: Kris, Shen

Kris- Use more ref for the horse( mainly the head with right lighting) and the girl will help . The main difficulty for the girl is how and where the light should look on her. Even your own photo with right lighting will give an idea and make thing easier. She should be lighter more for better result. SOFTEN  the blending and less sharp details on her. The woman body should look smooth and  soft...!!  Also use some ref. for the cliff in the background . You don't have to do  much s but it have look interesting, convincing and right.
Always put your ref. side by side with your artwork while working. Don t work from memory and after what we presume.

Shen- The overall and  horse head look good. It 's not an easy view to do. Just need fine tune some details on the head and readjust the shoulder and the chest of the horse . I re positioned the cloud formation to stop the sliding down movement to much , keeping the focus on the subject. See some modifications here.

Shen Jia - Week 10 (WIP)

I completely repainted the clouds because I realized that it had the exact opposite lighting of the rest of the composition.

To be honest, I liked how it looked before. 😛

I'm also thinking of removing the tail of the cat-ball and stop trying to make it look like a cat.😅

Do you have any suggestions on the composition before I move to colour?

feedback please Charles

Hey Charles, here's my current update on my progress. Feedback would be much appreciated please.