Feedback: Kris, Shen

Kris- Use more ref for the horse( mainly the head with right lighting) and the girl will help . The main difficulty for the girl is how and where the light should look on her. Even your own photo with right lighting will give an idea and make thing easier. She should be lighter more for better result. SOFTEN  the blending and less sharp details on her. The woman body should look smooth and  soft...!!  Also use some ref. for the cliff in the background . You don't have to do  much s but it have look interesting, convincing and right.
Always put your ref. side by side with your artwork while working. Don t work from memory and after what we presume.

Shen- The overall and  horse head look good. It 's not an easy view to do. Just need fine tune some details on the head and readjust the shoulder and the chest of the horse . I re positioned the cloud formation to stop the sliding down movement to much , keeping the focus on the subject. See some modifications here.